Comet the Skeleton

Full Name: Comet
Nickname: Crow, but only to close friends
Age: 27

Universe of Origin: Errortale (NOT Crayon queen's)
Soul Trait : Integrity


Attack pattern: Bones when in close quarters, and orange feathers when at a distance

Personality: Comet is a rather calm skeleton, preferring to talk things out rather than fight. He is kindhearted, and very set in his ways. He is open to other ideas, and isn't quick to come to conclusions about other people. The nickname Crow comes from his like of all things shiny to the point of it being detrimental. He is easily swayed by people offering him shiny objects.

Appearance: A rather tall skeleton, Comet sports a pair of large red wings that fade to a bright yellow, and a scarf in the same colours. He wears a leather duster, an orange shirt, and leather pants and boots, and occasionally a pair of brown goggles. Thanks to his stature, he's occasionally mistaken as a Papyrus. (I am willing to hand over a drawing of Comet upon request)

Backstory: Comet comes from a timeline once called Errortale, a messy timeline that simply wasn't meant to exist- another timeline of the same name already did, and his simply wasn't meant to be it. His timeline was a mess, things were jumbled, some monsters- like himself -had extra parts that they shouldn't have. Comet himself was more of a background character than anything, though he did become quite a close friend of his timeline's Papyrus, and spent a fair bit of time either talking to him, or in Grillby's. When Frisk finally showed up and started to mess with his timeline, its faults became its downfall, and the timeline quickly began to collapse on itself. Comet managed to escape through one of the many new faults in the timeline before things got too bad, but couldn't bring anyone with him. Comet wandered aimlessly through the multiverse for some time, trying to find his friends and family, but never did. In his wandering, he instead stumbled upon the Citadel. Unsure of where else to go, he convinced himself to stay, almost certain he'd find something here that could possibly fill the void left by losing all his friends and family. Comet now calls the Fell District home, and is always up to making new friends.



Nickname: Snowie
How did you found this forum? A friend of mine, Creation, handed me a link to the forum!
Rules Codes: verified
Suggestions?: Nothing!
Anything else?: I haven't done much writing on a forum before, but I've got 6 years of writing experience overall!

Hello there and Welcome!
Your introduction is good, just one little detail, your character can''t live in the Swap District. Why? Because they're racist and don't like exotics or Fell. (Mosly Fells)
And your character look too much different to be accepted there.
Except that, it's perfect.

The change has been made!

Perfect, thank you!