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W.D. Gaster
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PostSubject: Application Form   Mon 9 Jan - 18:22

*~Your Character~*

Full Name:
Nickname:
Age:

Universe of Origin:
Soul Trait (despite having white souls, monsters can still have a trait) : Patience/Justice/Bravery/Integrity/Perseverance/Kindness

Attack pattern: How does your character defend itself?

Personality: Make sure to include at least four positive traits and four faults.

Appearance: A minimum of three lines.

Backstory: A minimum of ten lines. Make sure to include information about their lives before and after discovering the citadel.


*~About You~*

Nickname:
How did you found this forum?
Rules Codes (the two are hidden in the rules):
Suggestions?
Anything else?


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[center][size=18][b]*~Your Character~*[/b][/size][/center]

[b]Full Name:[/b]
[b]Nickname:[/b]
[b]Age:[/b]

[b]Universe of Origin:[/b]
[b]Soul Trait (despite having white souls, monsters can still have a trait) :[/b] [color=#00FFFF]Patience[/color]/[color=#FFFF00]Justice[/color]/
[color=#FF9933]Bravery[/color]/[color=#0000FF]Integrity[/color]/
[color=#990099]Perseverance[/color]/[color=#006600]Kindness[/color]


[b]Attack pattern:[/b]

[b]Personality:[/b]

[b]Appearance:[/b]

[b]Backstory:[/b]


[center][size=18][b]*~About You~*[/b][/size][/center]

[b]Nickname:[/b]
[b]How did you found this forum?[/b]
[b]Rules Codes (the two are hidden in the rules):[/b]
[b]Suggestions?[/b]
[b]Anything else?[/b]




Last edited by W.D. Gaster on Tue 19 Sep - 16:41; edited 4 times in total
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Age : 19
Localisation : Currently playing as the WANDERING HANDYMAN. (SF Papyrus)

PostSubject: Re: Application Form   Tue 19 Sep - 6:10

Hey there! You've done a lovely job setting this up, but I noticed a few errors in the text and wanted to lend a hand. If I may, I think a few things could be a bit more clear with some edits.

One thing that I would recommend would be keeping clarifications to the initial post and deleting them in the code. (ie: delete the "lines minimum" from the code that is copied and pasted.) There are some mistakes in the English of the first post, and I thought that the following might flow a bit better. No need to use this if you like your original form better, but I thought I might post it here just in case you'd like to switch.

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*~Your Character~*

Full Name:
Nickname:
Age:

Universe of Origin:
Soul Trait (despite having white souls, monsters can still have a trait) : Patience/Justice/Bravery/Integrity/Perseverance/Kindness
(May I recommend adding determination here? Many people headcanon fell monsters as having red souls.)

Attack pattern: How does your character defend itself?

Personality: Make sure to include at least four positive traits and four faults.

Appearance: A minimum of three lines.

Backstory: A minimum of ten lines. Make sure to include information about their lives before and after discovering the citadel.


*~About You~*

Nickname:
How did you found this forum?
Rules Codes (the two are hidden in the rules):
Suggestions?
Anything else?

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When crafting the paste-able code, it might be best to take out anything in unbolded text to make the submissions more easily readable. People can look back at this post if they have questions about the rules.

Thank you so much, and cheers!
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PostSubject: Re: Application Form   Tue 19 Sep - 15:11

Thank you so much for you help, it's really appreciated.
I change it right away!

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PostSubject: Re: Application Form   Tue 19 Sep - 16:34

Haha, when I put the note about determination in there, I intended for it to be transformed into /Determination. Razz
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